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PostSubject: Justin Kurama{Done}   Sat Jul 23, 2011 3:39 am

~General Information~

Name: Justin Kurama

Nickname/Alias: "The Illusionist"

Weight:95lbs

Height: 5'2

Age: 13

Gender:Male

Appearance:
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Clothing:
Justin wears a short-sleeved orange and yellow jacket, a green neckerchief over a black shirt, and black gloves with white palms. He wears deep green pants, a black storage pack hanging from a black belt over his left leg, and boots. His brand is on his left wrist, mostly covered by his wristband. He has layered silver hair along with blue-green eyes, with all this coupled with his slendor body and cute face makes Justin a very attractive boy.

His pale complexion especially in the moonlight, gives him a ghastly air around himself. Being as graceful as a swan and as unique as a peacock, Justin stands at 5'2 with a slim build. With silky smooth skin and emerald green eyes, Justin has once or twice caused both men and women alike to take a second look.

Personality:Not much to say here. Justin does not have much of his own personality. The thing with him is, that he adapts and takes on the personality that others give off. He tends to pick a one at random and takes it onto himself. That means that he has the exceptional skill of noticing the feelings and assume the thought patterns of those he encounters extremely quickly and usually without fail. Justin has noticed that this is something that he does, and is trying to discern his own personality from all the others he has taken on.

Likes: “I like to play music(I excel with the violin and on the piano), study, practice, chrysanthemums, sakura trees, and my attempts at poetry hehehe…”

Dislikes: “ Well I hate annoying people, and people who expect way to much from me.”

~Clan Information~

Clan Name:Kurama

Kekei Genkai:Genjutsu Specialists

Clan Symbol: a feather

Clan History:canon

Ability Summary:Turning Genjutsu Real

~Rank/Village Information~

Classification:Genin/Squad member

Letter Rank: C

Village: Konoha

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:

  • Main:Genjutsu
  • Sub:

Elemental Affinity:

  • Main:Fuuton
  • Main:
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Special Characteristics:
Mind's Eye of the Kagura: This is a technique Justin has been taught via his "special training." Though unable to use it to its full poitential as of yet, Justin needs complete concentration when using this technique. The maximum distance he is able to sense is 15m. Via concentrating, Justin can tell where specific people are and if they are trapped/using genjutsu. This technique gets more advanced as he grows older.

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Eremophobia:
Being alone. The solitude, the lack of bodies, the feeling of loneliness is what Justin dreads. Events in his past, has caused him to develop this phobia so early in his life. Because of his personality, Justin rarely is alone, though that is mainly because of his determination to constantly be with someone.

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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:04 am

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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Thu Jul 28, 2011 7:07 am

The Kurama clan..once every few generations 1 Kurama is born with Genjutsu powerful enough to make it all happen in reality. Including harm, and kill the target. That type of strength wont be allowable. The most you will be able to do is advanced regular genjutsu, not making the Genjutsu happen in reality.

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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:46 pm

What about giving him genjutsu with tangible effects, not quite real, but they feel pain greated than usual genjutsu, it can knock them out and give them mental pain, but can't kill them?
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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Thu Jul 28, 2011 11:46 pm

Sure, but he needs to add some specifics on it.

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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Sat Jul 30, 2011 10:54 am

umm i think it'd be better if you spoke to me...about my app y'know? so i understand what needs to be added/taken out
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PostSubject: Re: Justin Kurama{Done}   Sat Jul 30, 2011 1:30 pm

Your clan says that you can turn genjutsu real, but that's sort of unfair to other players; So just change it so say..'Tangible effects on genjutsu' which is basically a weaker version of that; They'll feel the pain, and can be knocked out, but not killed.

Also, your flaw needs to be something to make up for your genjutsu; Being as your a long-ranged, mind-based character, try saying that he's physically weak and can't fight well in taijutsu?
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