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PostSubject: Tia Halibel   Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:10 am

~General Information~

Name: Tia Halibel

Nickname/Alias: The Water Goddess

Weight: 135

Height: 5'10"

Age: 24

Gender: Female

Appearance: She wears a white and black outfit, white dominating but sometimes this i switched, that can be rather revealing. She has a sort of bone armor that she has formed because of her sword. This covers her face upper back and chest area. This is all hidden by the upper half of her outfit. There is also a number three tattooed on the inside of her left breast. She has blond hair, blond eye lashes and green eyes. She has a fairly dark complexion. Her blond hair is a bit messy and short but there are three long sectioned off pieces. The jacket that she wears zips from the bottom to top in the middle. The jacket's sleeves completely envelop her arms, terminating in black glove-like extensions at her extremities, which slightly give her fingers the appearance of a cat’s paw. Tia keeps her sword horizontally across her back. The sword itself is notably broad and short compared to others, completely hollow in the middle, and has a western-style guard.

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Personality: Silent, she is not one to talk much. She is very serious and has her reasons why. Her mouth is covered by her outfit most of the time. The two objects right above her cheek bones on her jacket allows her to breathe underwater, they act as re-breathers. She will normally not undo the zipper to it unless the fight gets serious. She is not one to joke and has lost her sense of humor over the years. Normally if anyone makes a comment about her outfit, they'll probably be dead in the following few seconds. Tia will work with other villages if need be. Halibel likes to be independednt but is not rude about it. She will always go through with a mission, however, her own life comes before completing the mission. Tia is calm, level-headed and analytical, preferring not to engage in combat; she is content on silently observing both parties until the fighting reaches its conclusion, and actually fights only when she is challenged and attacked by an opponent or commanded to fight by her superiors. Halibel has a long fuse, but when it is set off, she can be very violent and aggressive. Not even when normally fighting will she show that sort of anger and brutality. When not engaged in combat, she will normally stand with her arms folded. She is a very powerful individual with a massive reserve of chakra but does not like to flaunt her powers regardless of the situation.



Likes: Water, Sharks, Loyalty, Swordsmenship

Dislikes: Fire, lightning, insubordination

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~Rank/Village Information~

Classification: Jounnin

Letter Rank: A

Village: Kirigakure

~Skill Information~

Skill Specialty:

  • Main: Kenjutsu
  • Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:

  • Main: Water
  • Main: --
  • Sub: --

Special Characteristics: Mastery over one element allows for Tia to use less chakra per jutsu. She can also dim down the power of an attack by not making hand signs.

Flaws/Weaknesses: Highly suseptable to lighting techniques and Genjutsu. Can realize it is a genjutsu, but cannot always dispell it with ease.

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PostSubject: Re: Tia Halibel   Thu Jul 28, 2011 8:36 am

Could you add the Jutsu amounts to the given table? And Jounin are only allowed to start with 30 Jutsu on their app. You should probably remove the Fuuinjutsu.

Just the first few things i noticed.

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PostSubject: Re: Tia Halibel   Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:45 pm

Please remove the resurrection technique; That would require a huge amount of chakra control, medical knowledge and medical skill to perform, and your character seems to have non. Also, a sword that can randomly do what most medical-nnin can't isn't fair.

Quoting from Posion Mist: 'As this technique combines ninjutsu, chemistry, and medical knowledge, using it requires fine chakra control and advanced ability in medical ninjutsu.' Therefor, your character wouldn't have any of the required skills to perform such a technique without medical as a spec, so that would need removing too please.

Fuuinjutsu would need removing as you don't have that.

Grudge rain needs multiple people who know that technique, not shadow clones, to perform it. So unless you know other people to do so, you can't really use it.

Hydration is a clan technique so..yeah, removal please.

To me, Exploding water waves would be A, and great would be S simply because of the immense amount of water created from nowhere; Even if it isn't the canon rank
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PostSubject: Re: Tia Halibel   Thu Jul 28, 2011 9:56 pm

We'll have to come to an agreement on my Resurreccion, because that's the main point of this character as well as my sword. The rest can be delt with as you requested though.
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PostSubject: Re: Tia Halibel   Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:40 pm

No, their won't be any agreement. None of the pure medics on the site have revival jutsu, so a person with kenjutsu and tons of water jutsu comparable to Kisame isn't going to get it. Sorry.

'Living' swords that give transformations aren't really allowed, again, sorry.

Finally, if it absors water chakra then any form of Raiton jutsu would electricute you during said technique, not just very powerful ones.
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